Needs... more?
It's really great, but i felt like there just wasn't enough behind the main part. Maybe it's just a preference of mine or something, but it seems like there should be more, or possibly just louder bass around 1:40-2:20ish.
Needs... more?
It's really great, but i felt like there just wasn't enough behind the main part. Maybe it's just a preference of mine or something, but it seems like there should be more, or possibly just louder bass around 1:40-2:20ish.
I like it.
Very good. Could use a little bit more work in places. (in my opinion it would be good a bit slower, not much though.) Puts shame to my stuff. What program do you use to write it?
Hmm.. I used Reason. Thanks for your kind review . =D And well, I shall listen to your works when I do have the time.
Sweet Jayzus!
love it. one of the best songs i've heard in a while. you need to keep up the good work.
do I? okido then!
FRIKKIN UBER PWNAGE
This is so great. I can just imagine this with the strobe lights and sweaty people jumping up and down aimlessly. It definitely does sound a lot like the a song from Blade... but that's only a bit of it... Mostly though, it is the greatest thing ever! It made me dance. I would lengthen it though.
nothing can work for my subject :(
Well since I'm a dude... I can't help with the singer but, if you tell me what you need lyrics about i should be able to help (maybe). Anyways it's a great song, although I would add a bit more bass... It would compliment the female voice.
I actually don't think it's half-bad!
A bit simple but not bad.
lol thanks man
AHHH! this is great
Dude... Make it longer! I was really getting into it and it ended. My only other suggestion is to add a bit more too it... it's ALMOST too simple. Don't go overboard.
Either way you did great.
9/10
5/5
Amateur Dance Music Critic~ Down-beat
PS
I submitted my first piece not too long ago. Could ya help me out and listen? It's classical, called Frozen Funeral.
Not Bad
I really like the feel of this song. It's got a great beat. My suggestion for you is to kick in some kind of "high pitched siren sound," as home-star-runner would say, at the 30 seconds mark right after that drop. At the 57 seconds, stick with what you have and then at 1:30 (i think that's where it is...) slowly get back into it.
Those are my suggestions. Please try it out and if you don't like it, forget it, but anyways, keep up the good work.
I'll try it out when i'm bored with other songs. thanks for the suggestion.
dj derrick
It's... okay.
It's a good song and everything... but in my opinion you need to add more to it. There's just not enough going on. Too simple. Make the lower part a bit louder and add some more to the beat and it would be much better.
thank you, thank you , thank you...(= i really appreciate it...actually I'm still doing the baby steps....X3 i didn't put much work on this though....just click here and there....listen, save&&submit......XD Thanks again!
This is a great song
I LOVE this song. All of your songs are great. The only problem with this song is that it takes a while to really get into it. Around 55 seconds is where I REALLY start getting into it. Keep up the good work. It's people like you that make me wish for some kind of mixing program like FL.
I'm the philosophical type. Whether I'm loud, quiet, outgoing or shy all depends on the people I'm around. I usually mimic what they do until I know them well enough to show my real self. I love music in general and I hope to be a band director/composer.
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